I think my problem is that I have had the kids make the small moment too small and not it is too hard to add details. For ex: someone wrote about a ball pit at the party. They stretched just the ball pit over 3 pages. You can only add so many details to that! So now i am thinking that the party could be the small moment and they can discuss 3 things they did at the party. This would allow for more details. What d u think? Does that sound ok? Can anyone share some small moments your kids have written about so i have some other ideas?? Thank you sooo much!!!!!!!!!!!!